in response to my post that day...
leoNArdz wrote...
(and i am too lazy to blog today so i shall just copy and not think...)

I find your verse on Saturday
Really quite repulsive.
It has that sort of quality
That makes one quite convulsive.

The rhythm is atrocious
I fear I have to say.
And you make up words to fit the rhymes
That do not go your way!

Now Charlie, you must listen
When I teach you how to write.
It's the nonessential parts of it
That makes your poem trite.

So pen these words of wisdom
With your icky, sweaty palms,
And memorise (with reverence)
"The Leonard book of Psalms"!

Amen.

thank you very much for your not-so-constructive criticism...
watch me bow down to your brilliance... and your wonderful skill...
oh my gosh... without a dictionary...? how do you do it...?
bow...
kowtow...
bow...